First of all, it should be
noted
that we do expect to see the poem. Unlike earlier or present-day
oral forms, we would not expect to hear it performed (though it
might benefit from such performance). Furthermore, we would expect
it to have an appearance on the page that differs from the
appearance of prose. It is this appearance, in fact, that triggers
the rest of our response.
For example,
something like the
following sentence recently appeared as a local news item:
"Neighbors reported that a seeing eye dog was attacked by a pit
bull terrier as her blind owner screamed for help." Suppose,
however, that we came across these words arranged on the page in
this manner:
Neighbors
reported
that a seeing eye dog
was attacked by a pit bull terrier
as her blind owner screamed for
help
We would no longer
think of this as
a statement of specific historical fact (a news item). Because of
its appearance, we would assume it was a "poem," and we would bring
to it other expectations. We would expect it to carry some
significant theme. We would assume that it was unified, that we
could "make sense" of it, because all its elements were aligned to
suggest this theme. For example, we might assume that there was a
purpose to the unusual line breaks--perhaps to emphasize (by
isolating them) the single words "neighbors," "reported," and
"help." Because of this emphasis, we might also assume a
significant relationship between these words and the situation
described. Do the opposing connotations of the words "help" and
"reported" suggest an uncaring relationship between supposedly
friendly "neighbor" and blind person? And what about the speaker of
the poem? What is his or her attitude about this incident?
Furthermore,
beyond the very
dramatic technique of isolating a single word on a line, just by
placing a word or a phrase at the end of a line, a poet gives it
some degree of emphasis--because in reading we would usually pause
slightly there. Thus when the phrases "pit bull terrier" and
"seeing eye dog" are placed at the end of their lines, is the
contrast between the two kinds of dogs subtly emphasized? Is our
sense of horror enhanced by the climactic position of the phrase
"screamed for"? Through some rather simple changes, the newspaper
statement has become considerably more intense.
This brief example illustrates an important
principle--that how we
read is conditioned by our assumptions and expectations, by the
conventions and codes we apply. And it seems we do possess the most
basic coding of lyric poems. In this case, there were three
assumptions and expectations, the first one triggering the others:
(1) the physical appearance--the line breaks, with their suggestion
of a "verse" or "stanzaic" as opposed to a "continuous" prose form-
-triggered the assumption that this was a "poem," and thus set up
(2) the expectation of some significant theme, thought to be
conveyed through (3) a short, but coherent (i.e., unified)
structure. How we pursue the structure may vary. (Here, we
postulated a functional "verse" form, with functional word choices,
functional word placement, and an appropriate speaker/situation
complex.) But basically we know what we must do. Let us see what
else we already "know" about reading lyric poetry, especially about
"stanza" form, and about the relationship between "speaker" and
theme.
Verse or "Stanza" Form
One of the aspects of lyric
poetry
with which some students may feel uneasy is its "verse" or "stanza"
form. (Perhaps this feeling comes from earlier school assignments
that required them, in a rather mechanical way, to memorize rhyme
schemes.) Yet as suggested earlier, response to a "verse" or
"stanzaic" (rather than "prosaic") appearance is immediate. We do
not have to assign a technical label to the stanza ("oh, this is
rime royal") in order to respond meaningfully to it. It is true
that certain verse forms, even if we cannot name them, are familiar
ones, "in our heads," so to speak. (The ballad stanza is one, known
from nursery rhymes or hymns or some popular songs.) Other forms
are not. It is also true that knowing a great many historical
examples of a particular verse form may sometimes enrich our
response. But we can respond in a very basic way without that. We
already possess enough everyday experience with language-shaping to
do so. In the "poem" created by rearranging the news item, we
assumed that the spaced, physical separation of words caused by the
line breaks corresponded to slight pauses in speech, and so, as
suggested, we might give these words special emphasis; in other
poems, we might also assume significance in the way a stanza
clusters or groups certain words. Thus, using speech patterns we
are already familiar with, our feelings will follow and try to
"correspond" to what we perceive as the formal appearance on the
page.
For example,
without ever having to
name the verse form, we will find Walt Whitman's long flowing lines
typically evoking in us feelings of freedom, of breaking out of
boundaries. Consider the lengthened third line in the following:
Facing west, from California's
shores,
Inquiring, tireless, seeking what is yet unfound,
I, a child, very old, over waves, towards the house of maternity, the
land of
migrations, look afar.
The expanded third line helps to evoke the theme
of expansiveness.
In another example of this technique, Whitman's speaker watches a
"noiseless patient spider" send
filament,
filament, filament, out of itself,
Ever unreeling them, ever tirelessly speeding them,
and then thinks of his own soul, separate, yet
reaching out--
Surrounded, detached, in measureless
oceans of space,
Ceaselessly musing, venturing, throwing, seeking the spheres to connect
them,
Till the bridge you will need be formed, till the ductile anchor hold,
Till the gossamer thread you fling catch somewhere, o my soul.
By contrast with
Whitman, an earlier lyric form such as the
traditional fourteen-line sonnet is much more controlled, evoking
in us the feeling of a more confined, more regular, and more
ordered universe. We perceive that each line is the same length. A
carefully controlled rhyme scheme seems to circumscribe the
emotion. Yet this constriction may promote in us other kinds of
valuable feeling, different from those of the Whitman lines. "Nuns
fret not at their convent's narrow room," wrote Wordsworth in his
sonnet about the rewards of sonnet-writing, because "In truth the
prison, unto which we doom / Ourselves, no prison is." Instead, a
comforting sense of a graceful, ordered world often seems
implicit--particularly perhaps in the traditional "English" sonnet.
In this form, an
argument or situation may be divided up by its
rhyme scheme: there are three four-line sections (abab cdcd efef),
and then a couplet--two consecutively rhymed lines (gg). By
contrast with the alternating rhymes of the first three sections,
the concluding couplet gives a feeling of rounding off, of
completion. For example, Shakespearian sonnet "arguments" often feel
wonderfully comforting. A confident speaker addresses his beloved
with graceful exaggeration, in an exquisitely ordered compliment
(both to his love and to himself), arguing that because of his
sonnet, the beloved's memory will be preserved forever ("Not
marble, nor the gilded monuments / Of princes, shall outlive this
powerful rhyme"). Another sonnet's speaker may argue (in the first
and second four-line sections), that when everything worldly seems
to be going wrong, when he is "in disgrace with fortune and men's
eyes," he merely has to think (in the third four-line section) of
his beloved, and his state, like that of the morning lark, rises
and "sings hymns at heaven's gate." The couplet (gg) neatly
"finishes" with:
For thy sweet love remembered such
wealth brings
That then I scorn to change my state with kings.
This ability of a couplet to evoke a feeling of
conclusiveness, of
"closure," is frequently exploited by Shakespeare in his plays.
After using blank verse (which is unrhymed) or prose for most of a
scene, he will end it with one or more couplets.
Whitman's free
verse and
Shakespeare's sonnets seem to represent opposite thrusts among
verse forms. But they demonstrate in a simple way that given what
we have already acquired, our sense of various possibilities in
using language, we can respond immediately to the spatial and sound
groupings we lump together under the name of "stanzaic" form.
Other lyric conventions:
Lyric epiphanies and lyric speakers
Adapted from A Guide to the Study of
Literature: A Companion Text for Core Studies 6, Landmarks of Literature,
©English Department, Brooklyn College.
|