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Type of poem: lyric
poem Type of lyric poem: sonnet Type of sonnet: English or Shakespearean sonnet |
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The Composition of "Bright
Star" Definitions and Allusions Analysis of "Bright Star" Syllabus for Keats |
Keats wrote "Bright Star" in 1819
and revised it in 1820, perhaps on the (final) voyage to Italy. Friends
and his
doctor had urged him to try a common treatment for tuberculosis, a trip
to Italy; however, Keats was aware that he was dying. Some critics have
theorized that this poem was addressed to his fiance, Fanny Brawne, and connect the poem to his May 3, 1818 letter to her.
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line 1 | Bright star, would I were stedfast as thou art-- | Unchanging, constant |
line 2 | Not in lone splendour hung aloft the night! | Above, high over the earth. Keats is pointing out the star's isolation, as well as a positive quality, its splendour. Its separateness contasts with the poet's relationship with his beloved later. |
line 3 | And watching, with eternal lids apart, | Eyelids. The star's isolation is implicit in its watching and in its not participating. It never sleeps. There is also a lack of motion in these lines. |
line 4 | Like nature's patient, sleepless Eremite, | Hermit,usually with a religious connotation. Emphasizing the star's sleeplessness is part of the characterization of the star's non-humanness, which makes it an impossible goal for a human being to aspire to. |
line 5 | The moving waters at their priestlike task | The rise and the fall of the tides twice a day are seen as a religiously performed ritual. With the poem's shift to earth, there is movement and aliveness, as well as spirituality ("priestlike"). |
line 6 | Of pure ablution round earth's human shores, | A religious cleaning; ritual washing. This reference continues the religious imagery of "Eremite" and "priestlike." "Human" is what the poet is and the star is not. |
line 7 | Or gazing on the new soft-fallen mask | The "mask" is the covering of snow on the ground. This snow has pleasing connotations, being "new" and "soft." All the moon can do is "gaze." |
line 8 | Of snow upon the mountains and the moors- | Beauty (the snow) is found in diverse places on earth. The alliteration (repetition of M sounds) stresses the connection of these words. |
line 9 | No--yet still stedfast, still unchangeable, | The poet turns again to himself; "Still" has two meanings here: (1) always or ever and (2) motionless. |
line 10 | Pillow'd upon my fair love's ripening breast, | Movement and change in human life are introduced with "ripening," a contrast to the star. |
line 11 | To feel for ever its soft fall and swell, | "Fall and swell" are also change and movement . "Soft" intensifies the sensuality introduced with "pillow'd." |
line 12 | Awake for ever in a sweet unrest | In contrast to the eternal sleeplessness and motionlessness of the star, the poet's not sleeping is active ("awake"). Now change or flux becomes desireable, "sweet unrest," an oxymoron. |
line 13 | Still, still to hear her tender-taken breath, | Repetition ("still" is used 4 times in 5 lines) emphasizes time/timelessness for human beings. "Breath" is flux, and "tender" makes it positive. |
line 14 | And so live ever--or else swoon to death. | Three of the last four lines use "for ever" or "ever," emphasizing steadfastness in time or eternity, but it is an eternity of love, passion and sensuality. In a swift reversal, the poet accepts the possibilty of dying from pleasure. "Swoon" has sexual overtones; orgasm is often compared to a dying (the French term for orgasm is le petit morte, or the small death). Because of its position as the last word in the poem and because of being an accented syllable, "death" carries a great deal of weight in the final effect and meaning of the poem. |
In the first line, the poet
expresses his desire for an ideal--to be as steadfast as a star--an
ideal which cannot be achieved by a human being in this world of change
or flux, as
he comes to realize by the end of the poem. In fact, he is unable to
identify even briefly with the star; immediately, in line 2, he asserts
a negative, "not." And lines 2-8 reject qualities of the star's
steadfastness . Even the religious imagery is associated with coldness
and aloneness; moreover, the star is cut off from the beauties of
nature on earth.
Once the poet eliminates the non-human qualities of the star, he is left with just the quality of steadfastness. He can now define steadfastness in terms of human life on earth, in the world of love and movement. As in so many poems, Keats is grappling with the paradox of the desire for permanence and a world of timelessness and eternity (the star) while living in a world of time and flux. The paradox is resolved by the end of the poem: joy and fulfillment are to be found here, now; he needs no more. There is a possible ambiguity in the last line; is Keats saying that even if love doesn't enable him to live forever, he will die content in ecstasy and love?
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Keats, Online overview Lyric Poems, pp. 1-34, 51, 52 "On First Looking into Chapman's Homer" "When I have fears that I may cease to be" "Bright star, would I were stedfast as thou art" |
Lyric Poems, pp. 34-45 "The Eve of St. Agnes" "To Autumn" |
Lyric Poems, pp. 45-62 "Ode to a Nightingale" "Ode on a Grecian Urn" |
Lyric Poems (continued) "La Belle Dame sans Merci" "Ode on Melancholy" **Supplemental Reading** Reading Lyric Poetry The Lyric Stanza: A Convention Lyric Epiphanies and Speakers The Romantic Meditative Ode |
Lyric Poems (continued) "Ode to Psyche" |
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